a very original piece of work, and i liked the way you took time before revealing it.
- 24/10/2003
- 01:16:58
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i feel that the essay was supposed to be about someone elses impact on your life, not yours on the little boymaybe you could say that went there hoping to make a difference in others and funnily enough you ended up feeling as if you were the one to have been enriched by this wonderful experience.
- 24/10/2003
- 00:58:22
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
i liked the twist at the end...was totally unprepared for it.
- 24/10/2003
- 00:44:00
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
nicely worded
- 24/10/2003
- 00:39:01
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.