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  • Umm...

    Sorry to say, but Of Mice And Men isn't written by George Orwell, it's written by John Steinbeck.
    • 30/04/2004
    • 22:48:58
    • Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Hmm..

    I found this very hard to read. Keep in mind for next time to break things down.
    • 30/04/2004
    • 22:47:51
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Wow..

    That was wonderful. It really helped me in my report.
    • 30/04/2004
    • 22:41:27
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • THANKS SO MUCH

    Thanks for including a description of the places in the book.. I really needed it for my bookreport. Good job! :D
    • 30/04/2004
    • 19:48:35
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Well..

    good but needs more organization in its structure.
    • 30/04/2004
    • 19:42:12
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Nothing personal, but...

    I really was offended by your finishing sentence, \"I believe the answer lies in the fact that, had he known about the money to be made off his birthday, Jesus himself would have crawled over his own mother to get a piece of the action.\" I found it really sacriligious. >_<
    • 05/04/2004
    • 07:24:23
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • :)

    an okay essay, but needs more description and more length.
    • 24/03/2004
    • 01:55:47
    • Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Thanks

    Good work, but here's some suggestions: in order to make your essays appear to be more professional, don't add contents at the top and don't number your paragraphs. It'll make it flow better. Otherwise, good work.
    • 24/03/2004
    • 01:47:01
    • Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • OK

    I think you're essay is okay.. Certainly helpful in some ways, but it would've been even better if more thought was put into it.
    • 24/03/2004
    • 01:07:16
    • Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.