Why do I dance?
I dance to answer my own life's questions and sometimes even to calm myself. I believe that people do things for a reason and there's no better way to observe something you do than to put it into physical form and analyze it. Dancing keeps me calm because it takes large amounts of energy and focus. If I need to, I can channel my emotions into my dancing, rather than towards other people.
Dance teaches me about life and life, in turn, teaches me about dance. Life teaches me that dance is beautiful, attractive, and fun. Life teaches me that dance is hard work and requires dedication. Life teaches me that dance is everywhere. Dance teaches me that life is beautiful, attractive, and fun. Dance teaches me that life is not always fair and requires teamwork. Dance teaches me that life is everywhere.
For me, dancing not only gives me a workout, but also gives me a challenge.
It teaches me endurance, confidence, and appreciation. It allows room for mistakes, growth, creativity, experience, cooperation, friends, and a reason to get up every morning.
I want to express in my pieces the contrasting, yet intertwined personality that is at the core of my being. I want to translate all this into dance so I can better understand my art, my life, and myself.
Dance fever
Beautiful Essay
I really feel that you truely love dancing. If I could give you any advice it would be to reach deeper into your heart when you write. You have many great ideas, you should try to elaborate on them. Especially in the paragraph that begins "For me...". You used so many wonderful adjectives in that paragraph to really give the reader a sense of what you felt, but try to say why.
Why is challenge good?
How does confidence make you FEEL?
You have a wonderful start and a paper that has some good emotions in it.
:)
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