Did we really land on the moon . Here Are ome explantion to why nasa csnt prove the landed on the moon.

I have to agree with "iruser" and "serpentina", the author has definately been able to show his strong feelings about the matter. Regardless of the poor grammer, I think this still makes for a good essay.


The facts that the author has put forward is very interesting. Like with many other things (ie. World Trade Center/ 9.11) I think this is another little american conspiracy. As you can see, there are many things that just don't add up - and NASA cannot answer certain questions to prove their side of things!


There are similarities with the 9/11 situation. There are soo many questions that have been avoided and no explination given as to why there weren't any jewish people in the building on 9/11 (even though about 40% or something of the work force in the WTC were jews).

I rated this essay good. I could tell that the author is really convinced that no one actually landed on the moon and he did a good job of sort of convincing me that no one landed on the moon. But he is in the tenth grade and I can point out about 5- 10 grammer mistakes that he made and he needs to get his math right to. If the shuttle weighed 35,000 pounds on earth and the moon is 1/6 th of the earths weight then it would weigh 5,000 pounds not 6,000

The author was definitely passionate about the subject, but his choice of presenting the arguments, as well as the references cited, were far from convincing.

As for finding facts to support the non-moon landing theory, the Israeli connection to 9/11 or any other outrageous conspiracy theory, one would only have to browse the internet and find facts to support their arguments. In five minutes, I found pages that presented the following: Elvis and Jim Morrison are still alive under government protection, the holocaust never happened, and other theories.

Be careful when choosing references to ensure that the material is relevent, unbiased and accurate.

I giving you a good for the effort that you put into this paper.

The author seems passionate about the subject, and that shows in this essay. However, the organization is choppy if non-existant, and can be a bit confusing at times as to why he is telling us something. The paper serves as an excellent start, and could easily be re-worked into an excellent essay.