This was a great essay! Although there were a few grammatical errors that I noticed, your high vocabulary makes up for it. I'll be waiting for your sequal!
- 02/12/2003
- 18:27:41
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
This is great research for an essay, but as it is, this is NOT an essay. Use this and put it in paragraph form to make a pusuasive essay telling people why they should thank greece. It might not be popular among Americans, who would rather be thankful to live in a free country, but it would make for a great essay.
- 02/12/2003
- 18:12:25
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This is a great essay, as it is very interesting. I cannot point out all of the mistakes, but I did notice quite a few. You may want to have an English teacher look over and mayber proofread. Besides all of that, great work with you bibliography. I know, I hate writing them too, but you'll be happy when you can go back and read different stories from their books. Good Job!
- 02/12/2003
- 17:25:57
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I know it's called a "full" book report, but does it have to be so long. For a summary of a book, most teachers don't make you have it so long! That's why you SUM IT UP, not rewrite the whole book!
- 30/11/2003
- 21:33:19
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
It's a little bit hard to understand what you are trying to say. Fortunately, we are studying this very subject in my history class and I understand some of it. It is a little bit scattered, so maybe you could sort it out a little bit more next time.
- 30/11/2003
- 21:10:47
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.