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  • Good Analysis

    You've done a good job. You follow and analyze all needed symbols in the story to clarify "Trifles" However, you give so much subjective comments. I wish you can put in your perfect paper some more objective ideas. Thanks
    • 23/07/2004
    • 19:45:33
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Well done

    You have created a great analysis of two poems.However, i wish you can compare other aspects like love, faith, hope ...in these poems.
    • 25/04/2004
    • 11:25:17
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Good job

    You show a great effort in finding the technique of every single poem.However, why don't you compare them together?
    • 25/04/2004
    • 11:09:54
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Well done

    In this essay, you've shown us a well relevant research and explaination about the matrix o structure in organisation.However, you should give some useful application of this structure in the real life.
    • 29/02/2004
    • 12:18:48
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Well done

    You show a very deep thought and well relevant knowledge about nonfiction film.However you lack of some agurments.Reinforce them and you essay is number one
    • 16/02/2004
    • 22:58:38
    • Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • It's good..

    You analyzed the story's plot carefully. You also go deep into some miscommunication and misunderstand between mothers and daughters.However, i wish you can raise up your problem and build a strong thesis about the story as a whole and linking events together.
    • 31/01/2004
    • 17:19:01
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Well done.

    I very happy to have a chance to glance at such a great paper like yours.However, you did not mention much about the gap between the CHinese culture and Amirican culture, as well as the meaning of" joy luck club".Put soem more stuff and your essay is perfect.
    • 30/01/2004
    • 17:23:38
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Vague thesis

    Well done. How ever, you eassay does not focus on your main point much.Some of your points contrasts each other. However, when you give out the fact that opium helps Chinese lengthened their working hour-does Marijuana help people do anything?
    • 26/01/2004
    • 20:22:03
    • Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Plentiful information

    You have done a good job.You made me admire your knowledge.However, you quoted too much evidence and i rarely see your truly point of view. Expand your topic more.
    • 26/01/2004
    • 20:17:48
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Good essay

    You have impressed me by your deep though about Emily and her work. You go far than that by digging the phylosophy about GOd.Well done.
    • 19/01/2004
    • 02:38:25
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Excellent

    You have written a wonderful essay about the eagle. When you talked about the falling of an eagle, and compare it with the death, you impress me so much.However, you did not mention anything about the beat or literary devices of this poem.A missing
    • 19/01/2004
    • 02:32:50
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Well done

    The summarize of your research contains many valuaable information.The way you choose words make me admire your deep thougt.Overall, this is an excellent research.
    • 17/01/2004
    • 21:49:15
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.