Overall essay seems to have a good flow... would suggest to include ref and citation within paragraphs
- 06/05/2004
- 00:09:34
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
The essays seems to be ok... but I would recomment you to include some references at the end of the essay... the flow looks fine tooo...
- 06/05/2004
- 00:07:08
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Yea agree with ultraview, its a good piece of work. Well structured and referenced.. however would recommend the harvard referencing method.
- 05/05/2004
- 23:42:18
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
The essay would be good or better if some forms of citation and references included.. these will proof the academic literature has taken place.
- 05/05/2004
- 23:38:03
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
The essay seems to be good but could have done some further better citation and references.
- 05/05/2004
- 23:32:58
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Essay seems to be good however would be better if further research being done.
- 26/04/2004
- 03:49:25
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Very good piece of work, however would advise you to have the citation and references for academic literature. All the best.
- 26/04/2004
- 01:48:34
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.