I found this essay very informative. The title of the essay really drew me in. Once again, good job.
- 27/05/2006
- 13:49:50
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
I felt this essay was very informative. You did a great job. I would consider using this paper as a source. The only this I would have added is a bibliography. Other than that Great job again.
- 24/04/2006
- 07:30:29
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
I found your essay very informative, but where did you find all of your information?
- 03/03/2006
- 19:30:41
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
You did an excellent job. You did a wonderful job supporting your essay with the poem. Your essay makes me want to read the poem, it sounds very interesting.
- 22/03/2005
- 12:38:12
- Score: 22 out of 26 people found this comment useful.
This was a waste of your time to submit.
- 21/03/2005
- 18:37:54
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
just to let everbody know this essay is really about me. I had a friend do this to me. I wrote this essay saying that it was someone else because we were not allowd to do an "I" paper.
- 21/03/2005
- 18:25:29
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
this paper was hard for me to write. I fwwl parents are to blame for their children getting into trouble wiht the law and acting violently. I do believe there is a difference between violence on tv and in reality. I guess what I meant is kids will see violence on tv and sometimes want to recreate what they saw.
- 21/03/2005
- 18:22:55
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
for everybody that was so harsh to me, I did not want to do this essay, I do listen to rap music and feel as a parent myself we do have to monitor what our children are getting involved in.
- 21/03/2005
- 18:18:36
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I really liked your essay. There was a lot of information that you state that I found while doing research for my paper on Teen Violence.
- 17/03/2005
- 15:15:48
- Score: 0 out of 2 people found this comment useful.