It was pretty good, but the focus wanders at times.
- 15/12/2005
- 23:48:38
- Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
Good paper, lots of opinion as well as facts. Well done.
- 10/04/2005
- 21:56:51
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Very good essay, good use of vocabulary and analysis throughout the paper. High quality.
- 18/04/2004
- 12:29:52
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Too many refrences to yourself (the writer), sentence structure needs work as does the level of vocabulary.
- 18/04/2004
- 12:26:47
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
The thesis seemed compact and forced, and the whole paper seemed to be condensed instead of flowing. Still had some good points, and analysis.
- 18/04/2004
- 12:25:07
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Very well written, high quality. I especially liked the relationships of the characters explained on a deeper level.
- 18/04/2004
- 12:22:54
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.