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  • .BW.RA. is quite the ass

    just needs some work
    • 29/11/2004
    • 00:46:02
    • Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Jackal8 aka A.R. is an ass

    this was the best essay ever
    • 29/11/2004
    • 00:21:17
    • Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Good idea

    if only this essay was really good, it would have helped, you didnt exatly answer the questiooni.e. what was the affect, i really only got a couple of points, the masses of men and munition sent to the western front...you gave the cause but the question asked for the effectplus, try and be grammatically correct
    • 27/11/2004
    • 00:16:26
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Xie xie ni

    thank you for this essay it helped so much!!!! wo gao xing
    • 24/11/2004
    • 17:22:42
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Hsc modern history syllabus

    excellent, i like it because it adresses the sylabbus directlyvery helpful seeing as im beginning the hsc course now
    • 19/11/2004
    • 17:54:45
    • Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Not so good

    the longest paragraph u have is six lines. too many quotes, too many one sentence paragraphs. on the bright side u had a lot of stof covered. However everything was skimmed over, not analyzed. 4/10
    • 09/09/2004
    • 05:57:46
    • Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Good but slightly lacking

    you have a lot about the leagur of nations and its structure but you need to incorporate more about the failure of the league i.e. manchurian crisis, economic factors and abyssinian crisis.but you have covered everything else, a good set of study notes, just lacking in some areas
    • 29/05/2004
    • 16:30:35
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Original

    a bit dull, but original
    • 16/05/2004
    • 04:39:51
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Excellent

    great essay!its very insightful!i very enjoyable read=)
    • 07/05/2004
    • 05:52:19
    • Score: 10 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
  • Thankyou so much!

    this is the book im doing for english class at the moment.. and this essay will help me be "inspired"! excellent timing mate =)
    • 05/05/2004
    • 02:40:36
    • Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Goodish

    i find it overall to be a pleasing account of the character macbeth and the storyline... but i think you can expand a lot more and the text has much potential, so a more indepth analysis would have greatly inmproved the text.
    • 05/05/2004
    • 02:20:08
    • Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Thankyou

    thankyou johnjjp for the complimenti did this asignment last year in year 9 and the source analysis was part of it. i have many other essays or similar or better quality, but i have yet to become a regular user so i am not yet submitting other essays until i am verified.this comment is to say thankyou for praise and thankyou even more for constructive criticism =)dont remove comment
    • 05/05/2004
    • 02:11:38
    • Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.