This essay is a decetn essay, average lenght, could use some grammer checks, i found a few mispelllings, overall it's a excellent written essay
- 15/03/2005
- 01:43:31
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Ive used the same one for the alst four years... so i wouldnt knowand its not even a real "backpack" tis a shoulder messenger bag (you shouldve included those :) )
- 02/06/2004
- 19:19:49
- Score: 6 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
i appreciated the opportunity to enjoy that... thank you.
- 02/06/2004
- 19:16:19
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intriguing...
- 02/06/2004
- 18:45:04
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what an interesting point of viewi dont like catstoo bad it dint get kicked :(
- 02/06/2004
- 18:24:31
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you can see where orwell was coming from hereusing julia to represent (his) current apathetic masses, who truely did not care that totalitariansim was spreading. they only cared if their own government decided to "limit their fun"and winston to be himself ;)good essay
- 02/06/2004
- 18:21:16
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i like very much the way you intertwined the light and dark imagery to fully display the instensity & ambiguity of the speaker. that was very well done.
- 02/06/2004
- 18:00:50
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considering the topic of your paper, and the apparent position of yourself (i assumed american public education) you appeared very educated. good job!
- 31/05/2004
- 14:13:29
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not tha i'm saying I havn't written worse crap (I have), but yuck.
- 31/05/2004
- 14:02:48
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I think it was magnificently done! superb job! absoulutely top-notch! well done, lad!!
- 20/05/2004
- 21:38:43
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.