You have a very good grasp and understanding of Robert Brown and his work. I love the way you wrote this detail. Good job! Also, you've analyzed this poem extremely well, ive always found it hard to analyze poems in great detail but somehow you've managed and you've done it brilliantly! My Last Duchess is a great poem, and now with a story behind it, its even greater. I particularly liked the idea about objectifying his wife by the use of the word 'Thats'.. very interesting interpretation of it, keep it up!
- 19/02/2008
- 23:42:31
- Score: 27 out of 30 people found this comment useful.
interesting viewhowever slightly skeptical of the origin
- 24/08/2005
- 22:01:39
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
i would just like to say i have read this and i fully support your arguement
- 24/08/2005
- 22:00:12
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
John, you write beautifully and i love this piece of literature you have created. You have great writing sense and unique style which portrays to the reader valuable information that helps the reader understand the poem with great detail. I am glad that someone is out there that is able to help the reader understand poetry with such inept skill. It is hard nowadays to find someone who completely understands the meaning and feelings behind the poetry. It is even harder to find someone like you who can explain these meanings and feelings with such detail.John, hands down the best.
- 05/04/2005
- 22:52:48
- Score: 28 out of 32 people found this comment useful.
nice i love itmake more!
- 05/04/2005
- 22:47:30
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
you might have some outside sources british literature novels come and support these views such as"the crucible" and show examples of nonfiction characters in the portion such as john proctor who was in fact a real person during the salem witch trails
- 16/03/2005
- 21:41:19
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
i love itvery nice developementgood theseisgood bodygood conclusion/introgrammar... eh.eh.eh fix it and itll be perfect
- 16/03/2005
- 21:39:47
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Nice job, but what is the purpose and what can you use this for?
- 16/03/2005
- 21:39:12
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
very nice on your standpoint and viewsbut some of these topics may be controversial and many people might not agree with your opininons
- 16/03/2005
- 21:38:29
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
great great essay"Future strategies may also be considered which use e-commerce applications in a supply chain oriented schema and distinguishes between applications that support or automate buying, production, and selling processes Aaker D, 2001; Strategic Market Management ?"needs to be rewordedgrammar mistakes throughout sortof.
- 16/03/2005
- 21:37:49
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
very helpfulbut... more developemnt/conclusion is necessary
- 16/03/2005
- 21:37:01
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
very very well developed and many points as well as your thesis was backed up.excellent
- 16/03/2005
- 21:28:50
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
GREAT ESSAYmy favorite line: "During the war many soldiers realized their maximum threshold for violence. "keep up the good work!loving it
- 16/03/2005
- 21:28:13
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
It seems to me that the there was no 'real' conclusion to it, it seems like it was cut off moments too short.
- 16/03/2005
- 21:27:12
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I had to revise my comment cuz it was too long, but overall you shoudlve thrown your first paragraph and second together into one, and made you second paragraph one sentence, because you choped ur thesis into two, and the thesis should be in frist paragraph
- 12/06/2004
- 20:55:07
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I know this paper doesnt necessarily ask out for views of different perspectives, as it is a narrative not a comparison paper, But i feel that not only becoming Christ like and doing good, that spreading the word and attempting to persuade the world to be peaceful along with yourself is just as important. Your paper is good, and i would give it an A if i was grading it.
- 12/06/2004
- 20:10:41
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
seams like you just threw this essay together with either a fake or real essay. Could've used more background and adventures, but for a 3 paragraph short topic I guess it was ok. :P
- 12/06/2004
- 17:49:20
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
This piece was a little bit ackwardly developed, the theme changed to quickly to my liking. There also was various amounts of grammatical problems. [Look at the title]
- 12/06/2004
- 12:05:02
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This was an interesting piece however, your entire research essay was not backed up by any supports or arguements, nor did you have quotations or citations to enforce your reasoning.
- 12/06/2004
- 12:03:23
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Yeah. This is fictional right? =P its a nice story.
- 02/06/2004
- 20:19:52
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Bad place to put your work and showcase it.Loadstone. Gift of a thousand worlds Part one. CheatHouse. June 02, 2004. Wednesday, 2 June 2004: 8:16 pm<http://www.CheatHouse.com/essay/essay_view.php?p_essay_id=44875>- LOADSTONE OWNS THIS NOW =[
- 02/06/2004
- 20:16:59
- Score: 12 out of 13 people found this comment useful.
Makes you think. nice style, its kinda catchy. nice touch @ the end. =D
- 02/06/2004
- 20:15:42
- Score: 29 out of 32 people found this comment useful.
Deep, this was a well developed poem. If you want to; to make it a bit cooler. You can make the words form some sort of animal =P.
- 02/06/2004
- 20:13:39
- Score: 8 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
This was a written application for Lynchburg College. I hope you realize, this paper should not be used to plagerize off of. Even if you wanted to, you can't. Why? It gives specific examples of that certain college =P. Unless... you wanted to go to Lynchburg College, and are seeking a Communications Print/Broadcast journalism and Speech Communications major
- 02/06/2004
- 20:09:10
- Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
It was a creative, descriptive and excellently developped story; enjoyed the climax and suspence. but again, grammar is kinda off. =P
- 02/06/2004
- 20:01:29
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
You should really consider sending this to a book publishing company =D, fix up the grammar and your set =P
- 02/06/2004
- 20:00:26
- Score: 13 out of 15 people found this comment useful.
If you have any suggestions upon improving this essay; please comment.
- 31/05/2004
- 23:07:14
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
This has been a very wonderfully written, and helpful essay. I am just wondering if you should have added a conclusion to wrap up all your ideas. =P overall, very very good.
- 31/05/2004
- 22:59:21
- Score: 45 out of 57 people found this comment useful.
Very Well developed essay =D good job.The only problem i see is how you generalized it too greatly and you did not even seem to have a thesis statement =P
- 25/05/2004
- 20:09:47
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
i think you require a citation page to make your essay look 'authentic' or else, your paper might be considered one of those rambling hippies that just talk about their ideals.
- 25/05/2004
- 20:01:47
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
i think quotations from direct text is necesarry to develope further your point.
- 25/05/2004
- 20:00:18
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
This was a well developed Essay. The only thing [personally] i believe is that there was not a completely developed conclusion to wrap-up your ideals.
- 25/05/2004
- 19:55:17
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This essay... did not feel... complete =x
- 25/05/2004
- 19:54:05
- Score: 14 out of 17 people found this comment useful.
This was a decent, touching essay. Fix up the grammar =D
- 25/05/2004
- 19:50:16
- Score: 25 out of 29 people found this comment useful.
If i could read spanish... =/ sorry.
- 25/05/2004
- 19:47:09
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This is a interesting essay on obesity, you should draw up a work cited sheet.
- 25/05/2004
- 19:26:54
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I wrote this!enjoy!
- 25/05/2004
- 19:25:34
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
this is the best paper i read on the subject, im going to cite from this =P
- 25/05/2004
- 19:19:14
- Score: 15 out of 19 people found this comment useful.