This essay is misleading and contains false information.I\'m surprised with the obvious denunciation of the SU and praise of the US in the first paragraph.Where is the instances of US provocation?
- 09/11/2004
- 16:12:13
- Score: 0 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I only look at A Current Affairs if I'm looking for a laugh - thanks for some reminders.
- 12/09/2004
- 09:10:23
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Having only basic background knowledge of Herodotus as 'father of history', I appreciate the extra information your essay gives. Not too heavy - but still solid information.
- 12/09/2004
- 09:01:08
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An interesting essay, though I must admit to being surprised at how informal the language was.
- 12/09/2004
- 08:56:34
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
You have produced quite a good essay, I too would have like to see a little more detail.Also, I'm not sure, but possibly in the last sentence 'I think...' would be better left out, as it is not really appropriate to write that they are your thoughts. Hopefully that makes sense.
- 29/05/2004
- 04:55:15
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Provided a good amount of information on the topic - and was also a well constructed essay.
- 29/05/2004
- 04:40:21
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
An informative essay, however, I would suggest a little more work on punctuation (especially your use of commas). Also, there are some minor typos that could be fixed by either spell-checking or proof-reading the essay first.
- 29/05/2004
- 04:30:09
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.