definitily too short, needs facts to back up what you talk about. i totally agree with what you are trying to relay to the reader but you should go into more detail.
- 12/02/2005
- 15:12:22
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
i feel that it was to short, where is the rest of it. marijuana is a broad subject and you should narrow it down. there is alot to learn about marijuana especially since most people think we should legalize it for medicinal purposes.
- 12/02/2005
- 15:09:33
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
wow i found this essay extremely informative....i know someone who has this disease and now i understand why she does it......thank you for informing us all and keep up the good work.
- 05/02/2005
- 04:43:20
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
thank you for writing about the dare program, the dare program is very informative and evryone can learn alot from it. i agree that it is up to the individual to make the program work for them.
- 05/02/2005
- 04:34:56
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
i have never heard of this particular poem but i am interested in reading it now. thank you very much for the wonderful job you have been doing. your work is flawless...my hat is off to you sir....
- 01/02/2005
- 11:22:36
- Score: 30 out of 36 people found this comment useful.
bravo john, i am very intrigued by your work. i have noticed you are passionate about poetry, please correct me if i am wrong for assuming. i love what i have read and cant wait to read more of your work.
- 01/02/2005
- 11:17:47
- Score: 20 out of 27 people found this comment useful.
john you write some pretty good essays, this one i felt is very detailed and it keeps the reader intrigued to the end. i can see that you are a gifted writer and it comes natural to you...well done!
- 01/02/2005
- 11:12:43
- Score: 34 out of 43 people found this comment useful.
the essay could of been more thought out but i liked it regardless
- 01/02/2005
- 10:19:10
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
well done except for a few grammatical errors
- 19/10/2004
- 16:46:11
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
i thought this essay was very thought out and well said.great job!
- 19/10/2004
- 13:53:35
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
i totally agree with what is written, unfortunately what is stated is true.
- 21/09/2004
- 12:52:04
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
this essay definetily makes me realize what a great country we do live in.ty keep up the good work.
- 21/09/2004
- 12:50:10
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
bravo, way to go. this piece made me realize truly what makes this country free and thats the people who die for it everyday.god bless all our troops!
- 21/09/2004
- 12:41:32
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
i thought this essay was very well prepared and well thought out.very good.i give it two thumbs up.
- 21/09/2004
- 12:13:13
- Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
i thought that it was very well written and it made me realize once again how how strong our nation an be in the time of crisis.well done.
- 21/09/2004
- 11:41:52
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
well written essay. we just learned this in sociology and i must say i learned more today then i did then. bravo!
- 11/09/2004
- 10:37:46
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
when i read this powerful essay it brought me to the edge of my seat. i was touched by the words and it gave me a mental image of what was going on. it was like reading a novel. very talented, keep them coming.
- 11/09/2004
- 10:35:02
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
there were a few errors but other then that it almost put me in the mindset of the author who wrote it.i completely can relate to what is being said.
- 11/09/2004
- 10:26:55
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
well written essay, it made me view things differently then before. i especially liked the conclusion.
- 11/09/2004
- 10:22:26
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.