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  • Opinion

    You have refered to yourself alot in this essay which is not such a good idea for more formal pieces of work. Other than that great ideas.
    • 19/10/2006
    • 07:21:54
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Thoughts, suggestions

    It's a good essay, but you have repeated yourself alot and you seem to like the words firstly secondly etc. lol
    • 15/06/2006
    • 03:44:04
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Thoughts, sources

    I think this is a really good essay. You could have maybe added your sources at the bottom to justify all your facts, but I believe you have done a good job, promoting both pros and cons.
    • 04/06/2006
    • 02:54:21
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Thoughts

    This is really good!! You show that you know what you are talking about and you have all the facts.
    • 17/05/2006
    • 06:37:13
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Thoughts

    I have read this book recently, but now reading this essay has made me notice manying things that I didn't notice in the book. Its very interesting and I would recommend the book.
    • 17/05/2006
    • 06:34:46
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.