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  • Nice

    This is a true research paper. You show a lot of understanding and ability to evaluate the situation. Well done!
    • 14/12/2008
    • 15:38:50
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice

    Great essay. It shows a lot of understanding in the book. Nicely written, great job!
    • 14/12/2008
    • 15:36:49
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Haha...

    Nice title, it made me laugh.
    • 23/09/2008
    • 02:53:31
    • Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice

    Great essay, shows a lot of understanding in the book. Nicely written, great job!
    • 21/09/2008
    • 10:06:34
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Ok...

    Nice short narrative, but I was a little rushed into it at the beginning with no introduction. Nice job though. You should have at least listed a grade level though!
    • 21/09/2008
    • 10:04:34
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Specify your grade level

    I think this essay is acceptable but for a grade range of 8-. I enjoyed reading about the steps to assessing and treating an accident. This will definitely be useful to somebody.
    • 21/09/2008
    • 10:02:21
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Nicely written

    You dive into a great essay from the beginning. You elaborate about everything related to sex. Great job!
    • 21/09/2008
    • 10:00:08
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Triple penetration

    What the heck is that??? lol
    • 21/09/2008
    • 09:55:08
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice persuasion

    Nicely written persuasive essay!However I'm a teen right now and I think that the way you wrote it, you are overthinking the situation. It's not too big of a deal as long as you use birth control, in my opinion. Although I have never had sex so I might be missing something.
    • 21/09/2008
    • 09:53:34
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good job

    I wish more people wrote essays on CheatHouse on this topic. I love reading about it :D jk
    • 21/09/2008
    • 09:49:01
    • Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Very nice

    Very nicely written. I love that people are submitting genuine essays rather than crap to get Super user quicker.I loved your essay, great job on it.
    • 21/09/2008
    • 09:46:28
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Language

    I thought this site was English only?
    • 14/09/2008
    • 09:06:16
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Title wrong

    Hi, the book was written by Zora Neale Hurston, not Janie Crawford. Janie Crawford is the main character.
    • 26/08/2008
    • 19:19:52
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Interesting

    This was a nice read. I'm planning to major in IT and I found it very interesting to read about factors that lead to the success of a website.Nicely written, as well.
    • 08/06/2008
    • 10:08:33
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good job

    Nicely written report on this book. This will definitely be helpful to someone.Looking through the report, I personally think it deserves more than a B+ ;)
    • 26/05/2008
    • 18:34:25
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Complete Lab

    Nicely done lab explicit and following the proper lab documentation procedures. Your conclusion could be a little longer though, answering more questions that someone who looked at the lab for the first time would wonder about.
    • 26/05/2008
    • 18:31:59
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good job.

    You did an excellent job on this book report. I enjoyed reading your introduction, then information on the book, then your connection to the book. This is an ideal book report of course :)
    • 11/05/2008
    • 10:09:14
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good Essay

    I read over your summarization for this movie and I get a good picture of what the movie was about. You have minimal grammatical errors and a really nice sense of description and elaboration of the certain things in the movie and things that influenced in the movie.Overall, I agree with the 'A-' letter grade this paper received.
    • 04/04/2008
    • 12:26:52
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Wow

    You are a professional at writing. Your use of diction and syntax in your essay is phenomenal. If you're going to college for an English major I wish you very good luck :)
    • 24/03/2008
    • 21:58:06
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Sorry

    I was wrong about my prior comment. Your essay can be in other languages. Sorry :(Very nice job!
    • 05/01/2008
    • 22:13:52
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Cool

    I enjoy reading essays like this one, that describe the way that people as a whole interpret something. Very nicely done, and nice topic you wrote about.
    • 05/01/2008
    • 22:09:18
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • What?

    Your paper needs to be in English, I am pretty sure.The paper looks long and pretty good though, so if you wrote it, good job :)
    • 05/01/2008
    • 22:07:09
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Neat

    I wrote a paper like this for Health class a couple of years ago and I have to say you include some very informative and appealing facts. Your conclusion could be a little longer but overall, excellent job!
    • 05/01/2008
    • 22:05:17
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • VERY INFORMATIVE

    I actually spent time reading your large essay and I have to say this is one of the best that I've read at CheatHouse.Many of my teachers also use a curve to bring all the grades up, even in AP Calculus, English, and US History.
    • 20/12/2007
    • 22:00:55
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Don' t do this next time

    Descriptive essay, but in your introduction you keep say 'Ming dynasty' way too much. Try using 'it' for a change :)
    • 20/12/2007
    • 21:52:13
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Interesting

    Very interesting topic you chose to write about. The only little flaw I saw in your essay was that you said 'In my opinion' in the topic sentence of your introduction. If you want to prove that your statement is the fact, then you can't say 'In my opinion.' :)
    • 20/12/2007
    • 21:47:46
    • Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Decent

    It seems almost as you are listing events and you lack an introduction or conclusion.However, very good job finding facts about the situation. You essay was information-packed about the time period.Overall, very nicely done. This is definitely an A paper.
    • 17/12/2007
    • 16:36:01
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    The paper looks a little too short for an A+ college paper, but you provide some very good information in your essay. Very nice job.
    • 11/12/2007
    • 20:45:36
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    Nice paper, but refrain from using words like 'good', 'nice', 'bad', etc. in your papers.
    • 11/12/2007
    • 20:43:42
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    You have some mildly stupid grammar errors for 11th grade, but other than that the paper looks very nice. Good job!
    • 11/12/2007
    • 20:40:59
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    you included some good points and made it short.Very professional way of writing an essay.
    • 11/12/2007
    • 20:38:22
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Next time

    Don't say what you are going to discuss. Get right to the point.
    • 25/11/2007
    • 15:24:23
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Bad...

    There are many better examples in Henry's essay that you failed to list. The examples that you DO list fail to be elaborated upon. Back up your examples with more information.
    • 06/11/2007
    • 11:48:13
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • No Sources...

    You mentioned your sources but did not list them.
    • 04/11/2007
    • 17:26:32
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good Job

    It was very interesting nice job!
    • 28/05/2006
    • 18:07:09
    • Score: 0 out of 2 people found this comment useful.