I see that u are a bit biased toward federalists. You need to state more points on why they believed that way.
- 17/12/2006
- 15:49:34
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Definitely not college level, it looks like middle school level.
- 30/11/2006
- 16:58:03
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Did your proffesor actually read this?
- 30/11/2006
- 13:26:27
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As stated below you might want to define what cults are and not assume the audience knows it.
- 28/11/2006
- 14:18:14
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I find it insulting, lol. I am addicted to computers myself, I have to stop.
- 26/11/2006
- 13:56:43
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I don't know if you can compare these two.
- 26/11/2006
- 13:54:29
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Very nice, infomative essay.
- 26/11/2006
- 13:53:22
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Too much details. The thesis is just making the question into a statement.
- 26/11/2006
- 13:49:49
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Has too much detail. Thesis is too short to answer the question.
- 26/11/2006
- 13:48:59
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Let me guess, was this of AP Euro? I had to do something very similar. If only you had posted this here along time ago.
- 26/11/2006
- 07:01:40
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Very detailed. I love this book and this essay.
- 26/11/2006
- 06:59:28
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The essay is not bad but I don't think is at 11th grade level.
- 26/11/2006
- 06:56:47
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The essay is good though.
- 12/11/2006
- 17:25:51
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Not bad for a sophmore. I believe you should have gotten a little higher grade. You should incude more details.
- 25/09/2006
- 16:35:53
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