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  • References

    A very good essay but use of references would have added to its value. Well done.
    • 30/03/2008
    • 02:31:16
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Sections of this essay have been plagerised.

    www.beaware.org.au/school/peer_pressure.asp
    • 31/01/2008
    • 02:53:36
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • References

    A good essay but not backed up by enough references.
    • 13/07/2007
    • 22:47:12
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Also but and

    I would not start a sentence with the words but, and, or also and definitely not a new paragraph.
    • 05/07/2007
    • 00:42:45
    • Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.