Was Leonidas' visit to the Oracles actually relevant or somewhat similar to an event that took place before the battle?
- 25/02/2009
- 19:40:31
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But this was a decently persuasive essay.As the bible serves no medical or factual proof that gay marriage is wrong, it is a decent emotional appeal to the religious readers. Regardless, I believe it was overused.
- 25/02/2009
- 19:35:34
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To see that this is a solid mix of factual material and a persuasive essay. It also would be useful to add the fact that in the event of enemy grenades, Mustard gas, as well as the flame thrower, which was developed during this war, that the trenches were built in zigzags and unevenly rather than straight, so that such attacks are less effective and take out less soldiers.
- 23/02/2009
- 19:47:43
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The trench ground floors had a canal line dug out in the middle of the walkway in the trenches, that had boards place over top of them to allow the soldiers to walk on top of them while the water flowed underneath. It wasn't necessarily up to their knees until months into the war, due to flooding, which they responded to by digging both more and deeper canals leading elsewhere.
- 23/02/2009
- 19:40:21
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I loved this whole essay. It was extremely persuasive, and I like the touch of putting the reader in the victims shoes. Killing the prisoners and giving them the easy way out is just stupid. I completely agree with you.
- 06/01/2009
- 14:28:05
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You had very reliable resources under your belt. It was truly professional in essence.
- 05/01/2009
- 12:07:43
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It was also a requirement to mention three examples of science in our book, as our genre had to be a form of science fiction. (Paragraph 12-14)
- 06/11/2008
- 12:15:00
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