Well written. The flow of the essay is vivid
- 28/03/2003
- 11:43:01
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Very informative
- 11/03/2003
- 11:52:14
- Score: 7 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
Nicely put up. As an Indian , Hats off to your essay about Mahatma Gandhi.Hai Hind
- 11/03/2003
- 11:42:10
- Score: 8 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
Community service though it consumes some time increases the all round personality of the student. Spending time in service is not a mere waste. It is a chance to get exposed to the outside world
- 11/03/2003
- 11:35:27
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
The conclusion is very catchy. The idea that the matter should be left to the pregnant woman to make her own decision is note-worthy.
- 09/03/2003
- 14:07:45
- Score: 9 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
should have omitted using double line spacing. Otherwise it is ok
- 09/03/2003
- 13:56:21
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Short but sweet. Not an essay actually, but just a personal opinion. It is good but not suitable for High School, 13th Grade
- 05/03/2003
- 11:30:51
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
"Anyone can become angry - that is easy. But to be angry at the right person, to the right degree, at the right time, for the right purpose, and in the right way - that is not so easy." This is very catchy. All your references and quotations are very good. The flow is also good. You have even talked of how to overcome anger. Really a master piece !!
- 04/03/2003
- 11:58:37
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
Too lengthy and too much dumping of informations. Very cumbersome to read.
- 04/03/2003
- 11:43:42
- Score: 8 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
ok-ish kind of essay
- 04/03/2003
- 11:40:09
- Score: 6 out of 11 people found this comment useful.
The flow is good
- 03/03/2003
- 06:11:09
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
It's not what you say, it's how you say it.I like the crux of your essay. Nice approach
- 28/02/2003
- 04:25:32
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.