Well-written and thought out, a lot of detail. This is a good piece of work
- 15/03/2003
- 12:56:37
- Score: 4 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
Very good, but a little long winded. Forgive me, but i think this religion is a little strange.
- 15/03/2003
- 11:39:18
- Score: 8 out of 12 people found this comment useful.
Good, although i think the conclusion is a little adrupt. I like the detail and you get your arguments across well.
- 15/03/2003
- 11:37:03
- Score: 5 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
Too short and too narrative, not enough analysis. The style of writing sounds too "personal" in my opinion. Also, there are some spelling and grammar errors. I like the essay idea though.
- 15/03/2003
- 11:32:02
- Score: 13 out of 14 people found this comment useful.
Very detailed and informative, although i don't find the topic interesting.
- 15/03/2003
- 11:12:47
- Score: 6 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
Very informative, well-written and generally well thought out.
- 15/03/2003
- 11:04:04
- Score: 8 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
Interesting, fairly well-written, although some blaring spelling mistakes and grammar issues, such as "invest in then thy own oneself".
- 15/03/2003
- 10:58:25
- Score: 8 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
A very good essay, it flows well and really gets its arguments across. The level of detail is high too.
- 15/03/2003
- 10:50:19
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Good, but could use more information and explanation, and it has has a few spelling mistakes.
- 15/03/2003
- 10:46:38
- Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.