This essay to me some time to read. I am not sure what the "boxes" denote in the paper, I am guessing bullets. This would be an excellent paper for an introductory marketing class. The format of the paper is very similar to how most business professors want their papers. I agree with most of the information and do not believe it was just "cut and paste" from the web. The works cited contributes to the validity of the paper! Nice job!
- 11/04/2003
- 11:35:14
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Do not get me wrong...I am a fan of Eminem. However, my views on this topic are a bit on the other extreme. There are parts in this critque where logic gets lost within deep-opened ideas. The paper mentions how punctuation is vital for a paper but I found a few grammatical errors. Good paper but I am not sure I would ever need it for school.
- 10/04/2003
- 02:14:47
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Nice! This essay explores the wonderful world of WWF. Who ever thought that such a barbaric sport could be portrayed in such an intellectual way? I was impressed my the level of maturity expressed by the author. I think this essay is good because the author took a creative license and wrote about something he/her really had passion for. This would make an excellent creative essay for a high school creative writing course! Good job and thanks!!!
- 10/04/2003
- 02:06:50
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.