A lot of run-on sentences. The topic is catchy and the essay is very interesting as well.
- 23/07/2003
- 16:00:48
- Score: 8 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
The topic is touching, but the grammar is very elementary.
- 23/07/2003
- 15:55:55
- Score: 13 out of 13 people found this comment useful.
The author begins by keeping a moderate approach, but ends with a statement supporting the "pro-choice" argument. The essay is informative with a little gramatical mistakes.
- 21/07/2003
- 15:36:58
- Score: 14 out of 14 people found this comment useful.
thoughts flow fluidly. Examples support the author's thesis.
- 20/07/2003
- 21:02:19
- Score: 17 out of 17 people found this comment useful.
This essay has a nice flow and covers all the points.
- 20/07/2003
- 15:32:22
- Score: 16 out of 16 people found this comment useful.