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  • A BIT TOO PERSONAL

    The definitions provided appear to be quite common-sensical but the tone is far too personal for an essay.Maybe this epistolary form wasn't the most fortunate one for such a writing.
    • 06/07/2004
    • 07:13:56
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • A BIT TOO PERSONAL

    The definitions provided appear to be quite common-sensical but the tone is far too personal for an essay.Maybe this epsitolary form wasn't the most fortunate one for such a writing.
    • 06/07/2004
    • 07:12:42
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Good work

    The summary and the commentary are quite good and detailed. Still, maybe a bit of concision wouldn't hurt. And watch the layout.
    • 11/02/2004
    • 17:15:47
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.