This was a great essay, and there was a lot of excellent material in it ((facts, statistics, etc.)). However, I did find several spelling and grammatical errors. For example, the sentence "After a few gang fights, hatred forms and gang murders and drive-by's begin to take place" should read "After a few gang fights, hatred forms, gang murders, and drive-by's begin to take place" to be grammatically correct.This was a very excellent peice, overall. It was extremely informative. Good job!
- 01/01/2004
- 16:42:10
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