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Needs grammatical work
The content is pretty good, though a bit confusing. You combine present and past tenses together, making it a bit harder to follow. The second half of your second paragraph is a run-on sentance, and needs to be broken up.Also, since this essay appears to be about cultural feminism, you should define it early int he paper, not as the last sentence.
- 06/03/2004
- 03:04:12
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