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  • Job well done

    i felt this essay to be pretty good very imformative and flowing a lil bit of your insight would be good as well bt i give it a a ok .
    • 17/04/2002
    • 19:33:13
    • Score: 4 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Very well done but u need a major change

    the fact that u used the word colored in your essay comes off as very racist, im not calling u racist but im making constructive criticism im now a days people dont use that word all though u may not mean harm but it can come off as that black or African American would be better words to use but all in all good essay
    • 16/04/2002
    • 20:36:43
    • Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.