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Flirting With Disaster: The OxyContin Epidemic In The U.S.
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Response to Marilyn Manson's Essay; Columbine: Whose Fault Is It?
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I think that the author has good ideas but they could be conveyed better. The sentence structure was a bit paroachial, and she could have gone more in depth by adding his/her own opinion or reaction to how the movie affected them.- 06/04/2004
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