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  • Very well done!

    i like all the comparisons you made in the essay....good job!!!
    • 28/03/2005
    • 14:27:38
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  • Title and intro

    i agree that the title is a little off from the subject of your paper. be a little more specific. also, in the introduction, you should put a more catchy grabber sentence. i do not think that you should disregard what you have because i think it is quite relevant to your topic...but if you write another sentence for the beginning, i think that you will really set your paper off. other than that, well done :)~christine~
    • 24/03/2005
    • 15:44:50
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.