Apt Examples used.Can also incorporate that stats are objective. they should be accepted on face value. Subjective part and their interpretation demands scrutiny.You can also talk about assessing the objective and empirical estimations and calculations.Overall nice attempt.
- 17/10/2005
- 15:08:52
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You are struggling with what audience you are addressing. Is it one that likes and is aware of potter or otherwise?Stress on repetition of routine characters and situations makes it look like an attempt to fill in the space. Do not repeat much.Use of language deserves appreciation.
- 10/10/2005
- 14:08:26
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For future, McDonalds needs to market itself using proof of vegetarian meals. If they market themselves as extremely hygenic and particular in preparations, it can change mind of consumers in favour again. One such statement can be found at:http://www.mcdonaldsindia.com/ourfood/quality_hygiene.html
- 08/10/2005
- 14:42:23
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