Excellent information but needs some work on the composition. salvageable and needs to be updated... Gotti recently passed away in prison.
- 30/09/2002
- 02:32:46
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Great information. Well thought out with good transitions. I plan to condense this paper and turn it into a speech!
- 30/09/2002
- 01:29:29
- Score: 6 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
Both informative and creative. Would be better if you accompanied the writing with examples. Also... there are still gramatical errors.
- 30/09/2002
- 01:09:27
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.