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Good job.
Good idea on putting questions before each paragraph. These helped the reader understand what that paragraph was going to analyze. Good Work :)- 26/10/2006
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Good opening paragraph
The opening paragraph was good because you got the reader thinking right off the bat. The quote was a good way to start this process in the readers head. I also liked how you put questions in there. These questions help the reader understand what your paper will be about.NICE JOB :)- 24/10/2006
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