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  • Misspellings and Errors

    There are a few misspellings and errors on this one that should of been easily spotted. There should be a comma between "chains" and "had" on the first paragraph. On the 4th and 5th paragraphs, "tiring" should be "trying."There are a few other things that could be changed to make the essay look a whole lot better but I shall leave that to you.
    • 18/11/2002
    • 19:46:31
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.

  • Wrong Information

    McMurphy was not given Electro-convulsive therapy at the end. It was a lobotomy operation instead.
    • 18/11/2002
    • 00:01:44
    • Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.