If you are writing on the same topic, I would advise you to look into the many events that occurred in Boston. For instance: Tea Act> Boston Tea Party> Intolerable Acts (aka Coersive Acts)>First Continental Congress. And then Lexington & Concord, Second Continental Congress. Since this is an essay on events leading to the American revolution, i think it should have discussed more of just that.Also, there is some incorrect information in there. The Revolution did not follow the Declaration of Independence. the Declaration of Independence was distributed July 4, 1776. The war was already going on by then (examples: Lexington & Concord was the start of the war-April 1775; Battle of Bunker Hill-1775)However, some of the information listed is extremely helpful.Other Criticisms:Poor StructureToo many quotes
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