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  • Good essay, bad conclusion

    The essay in general was well written, unfortunatly the conlusion was not well written, ussually a last paragraph is the conclusion, so it is not needed to put "In conclusion" also as for landing pre-teens and teens in jail, 9 year olds are considered preteens so it is emblematic to put that in the essay. Otherwise good job I would give it a 83%
    • 16/05/2004
    • 14:59:13
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Good Essay

    Not a bad essay for this topic, it is well written, but it is not worth a 90%, only it is worth about an 84%, good job other wise
    • 16/05/2004
    • 14:51:41
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.