User Details For: Phreaker11
Essay List
Motivational Racism ("Kaffir Boy" Comparison to "By Any Other Name")
- 625 words (3 pages)
- 36
- 0
War of 1812 - Canada and the effects of the war
- 1106 words (4 pages)
- 59
- 1
Summer - Argumentative Essay
- 631 words (3 pages)
- 119
- 0
Modes used in "The Pardoners Tale" - Chaucer
- 433 words (2 pages)
- 23
- 0
Comments List
Good essay, bad conclusion
The essay in general was well written, unfortunatly the conlusion was not well written, ussually a last paragraph is the conclusion, so it is not needed to put "In conclusion" also as for landing pre-teens and teens in jail, 9 year olds are considered preteens so it is emblematic to put that in the essay. Otherwise good job I would give it a 83%- 16/05/2004
- 14:59:13
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Good Essay
Not a bad essay for this topic, it is well written, but it is not worth a 90%, only it is worth about an 84%, good job other wise- 16/05/2004
- 14:51:41
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.