Christianity played a major role throughout the Middle Ages in society and politics. The Middle Ages, classified from 600 AD to 1350 AD, was significantly effected by Christianity because of the impact it had on the daily lives of people of the time. The beginning of the Early Middle Ages, after the Fall of Rome in 476 AD and the period known as the Dark Ages, the reorganization of the empire brought a desire for faith and religion, primarily Christianity. This trend of Christian importance was apparent until 1350, when the Black Death caused the end of a systematized era. The church is often viewed, during this period of time, as a center of corruption, greed, and evil, with materialistic popes and unholy acts. Even though there were immoral times, the presence of Christianity brought hope and stability to the empire politically and socially. In the Late Age of Antiquity, Christianity had started its rapid spread becoming the state religion in the fourth century, and emerging as a \"cultural trend\" (212).
It became further defined, and was the bases of the Western World\'s proceedings. Christianity\'s popularity influenced the church by people\'s newfound ability to concentrate on faith and a better life. With this foundation, the Middle Ages expanded religious importance by employing it in day to day life. Christianity was consistently present in the social arena of the Middle Ages. There were many controversies over Christian beliefs. The engrossment in Christianity in the eighth century had a non peaceful turn because of the Iconoclastic Controversy. It divided the Western and the Byzantine Empires additionally with the dispute over the use of icons in religious worship. This quarrel resulted in religious vigor through exploration of religious traditions and mysticism. The division between the empire was a constantly present with the arousal...
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The content of the essay itself is very good, but the format is horrible. Separate it into paragraph. I know that formatting can get screwed up when you upload stuff, so I'm not gonna push that :0
Constructive criticism:
You don't need slashes with citations, just quotes with the punctuation outside them, which you were pretty good with.
At the top of the essay, when refering to the Black Death, you may want to replace it with Bubonic Plague, or insert a footnote there or something.
"...significantly effected by Christianity..." try using 'affected' :)
Other than that, it was really good. You seem very informative, and have good sentence structure and a good sense of grammar.
Keep it up!
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