Your essay is very well written and strong in it's argument. I'm sure you already know this though
- 07/04/2004
- 10:01:16
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That wis a really beautiful piece of writing
- 10/03/2004
- 05:34:23
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This is something I wrote in 7th grade and I am now in 12th. As a 7th grade essay on a book of choice it scored me pretty good marks.It is my rough copy though.... I've no idea what I did with the polished up copy
- 09/03/2004
- 03:22:19
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Yes this is a is a lovely piece of work though the idea of scientifically analysing emotions is raised and addressed no further
- 08/03/2004
- 05:58:17
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My essay way written to answer questions and cover ground and I know I do take a while to get to the point but in doing so I am covering all the ground that needed to be covered and pointing out links and relationships
- 08/03/2004
- 05:26:29
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I got a real laugh out of this piece of work it was good. I don't think I will be able to keep a straight face when reading bad road signs again
- 08/03/2004
- 05:16:06
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Nice work short and to the point. As a senior essay I would try to lengthen it a little and polish up the languaged used."It will help people now and for sure in the long run" This is perhaps a too casual for a formal essay
- 08/03/2004
- 04:52:18
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I like this piece it is a fun and easy to read.It doesn't need a great purpose or length to be good.
- 08/03/2004
- 04:27:52
- Score: 27 out of 30 people found this comment useful.