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  • Good work

    This was a short, but very creative piece.
    • 05/11/2004
    • 19:30:04
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Beowulf

    It's a good essay, but a little short.
    • 05/11/2004
    • 19:29:00
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Pretty good

    The essay becomes a little bare near the end, but it is good overall.
    • 05/11/2004
    • 19:27:55
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Confusing

    This essay starts out about the civil war, then ends with your sister. It was really random.
    • 05/11/2004
    • 19:26:43
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Kiss of Death

    The essay is structured well and gives some good insight.
    • 05/11/2004
    • 19:24:51
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Friedman

    i learned a lot about economics that i didn't know before.
    • 05/11/2004
    • 18:35:12
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Research

    The paper was informative, but not cohesive.
    • 05/11/2004
    • 18:20:22
    • Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Good info

    This is some good advice for someone thinking about joining a sport.
    • 05/11/2004
    • 18:18:19
    • Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Unions

    It's a good topic. The drive system could have been explained a little more
    • 05/11/2004
    • 18:15:19
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good writers...

    This could be a great essay, but it's a little short.
    • 05/11/2004
    • 18:13:47
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Symbolism

    This essay is hard to read. There is a lot of unnecessary info
    • 05/11/2004
    • 18:12:51
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Castles

    This is a specialized essay. Cool to read about
    • 05/11/2004
    • 18:10:57
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Pearl Harbor

    This is an interesting question and you presented your thoughts very well
    • 05/11/2004
    • 18:08:07
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Constitution

    It's a good essay, but try putting in some citations or sources
    • 05/11/2004
    • 18:05:26
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Constitution

    It's a good essay, but try putting in some quotations/citations.
    • 05/11/2004
    • 18:04:55
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Pretty good

    it is a good essay, but there may be too many citations. good overall.
    • 05/11/2004
    • 18:02:56
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Short

    The essay was short, but there are good points here. Try filling it out a little more.
    • 05/11/2004
    • 18:01:27
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • 3M

    Very informative and hopefully helpful for someone.
    • 05/11/2004
    • 18:00:19
    • Score: 5 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • A Heart of Darkness

    Good ideas. Summery plus some commentary
    • 05/11/2004
    • 17:59:09
    • Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice job

    This analysis is in-depth and has some good ideas
    • 05/11/2004
    • 17:57:34
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Piano Concert

    Please read over your work next time for spelling errors.
    • 05/11/2004
    • 17:54:12
    • Score: 0 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Original

    This is a very original subject. It was interesting to read.
    • 05/11/2004
    • 17:51:59
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • New Beginnings

    This is a good essay. Good points and it makes sense
    • 05/11/2004
    • 17:50:46
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Great

    This is such a controversial topic and you presented the information in a great way
    • 05/11/2004
    • 17:49:18
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • The Seagull

    This was fun to read. There are some good points. Nice
    • 05/11/2004
    • 17:48:07
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Posts

    These are just a lot of posts from a website.
    • 05/11/2004
    • 17:46:11
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Bad

    This really isn't an essay and there aren't many usefull facts
    • 05/11/2004
    • 17:44:50
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good morning, Midnight

    There are some good points, but the essay is incoherent as a whole.
    • 05/11/2004
    • 17:42:10
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Great

    It is a really well-written piece. Nice job!
    • 05/11/2004
    • 17:39:50
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Short

    The essay is a little short, but it has some great ideas
    • 05/11/2004
    • 17:38:34
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Dracula...

    This was a really interesting essay to read. I think it would be interesting to learn more.
    • 05/11/2004
    • 17:37:28
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Informative

    There is a lot of good information here.
    • 05/11/2004
    • 17:35:07
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice

    I just finished reading the play for my english class. It's a good essay.
    • 05/11/2004
    • 17:34:08
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Confusing

    The format is confusing. Perhaps you should submit it in a different way, so that there are fewer random words and characters in the lab.
    • 05/11/2004
    • 17:32:38
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Ok

    This could be a really interesting essay, but it's way too short. Try expanding it with quotes
    • 05/11/2004
    • 17:30:27
    • Score: 6 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Pretty good

    There were several good points, but you could have made it a little more cohesive. Good luck next time
    • 05/11/2004
    • 17:29:25
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Little info

    This could have served a purpose, yet there was nothing there.
    • 05/11/2004
    • 17:27:21
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Bad

    this isn't helpful in any way, shape or form
    • 05/11/2004
    • 17:25:57
    • Score: 12 out of 12 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    There were several good points made. Nice comparisons
    • 05/11/2004
    • 17:22:37
    • Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice

    This was a really great essay. Little short though.
    • 05/11/2004
    • 17:20:03
    • Score: 8 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
  • Short

    The information was really interesting, although I think it could have been a little longer.
    • 08/08/2004
    • 13:43:24
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Very nice

    I loved the essay. It gives lots of useful information and should be more widely read.
    • 08/08/2004
    • 13:38:50
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Bally

    The topic was well researched and you've presented it in an easily-understanable manner.
    • 08/08/2004
    • 13:31:19
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Good supports

    The essay was well thought out and made lots of sense. Great job.
    • 08/08/2004
    • 13:28:43
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Similarities

    I think it's interesting that you would compare both of these plays, but I think you did a good job in finding the similarities.
    • 08/08/2004
    • 13:26:49
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Informative

    The essay gives so much detail and was written pretty well. It would be easier to read if it weren't double spaced, but otherwise, really great.
    • 08/08/2004
    • 13:21:30
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Fantastic!

    I never would have known so much about the viola if I'd not read this. A little short, but good overall.
    • 08/08/2004
    • 13:15:54
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Sexual Harassment

    It was a good essay and gave some good facts, but it doesn't seem long enough to make a real arguement otherwise.
    • 08/08/2004
    • 13:03:39
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Interesting

    I have never heard of this book before, but the set up of the essay makes me want to read it. Good work!
    • 08/08/2004
    • 12:58:12
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Basis

    I think the essay was mostly giving a description of the movie, with a little bit of commentary. Next time, add more of what you thought about the movie.
    • 08/08/2004
    • 12:56:05
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Very thorough

    I'm taking a class on American government and politics in the fall and I got a better perspective from the essay on the Patriot Act. Thanks!
    • 08/08/2004
    • 12:50:54
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Re-read

    The essay has some basis, but the grammer needs a little work and it is too short to really convince someone.
    • 08/08/2004
    • 12:46:29
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Meh...

    The essay is informational, but doesn't give the kind of real scientific info that would be necessary for a more professional piece. Good try.
    • 07/08/2004
    • 23:17:55
    • Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Really intense

    This is a professional-sounding paper and gives lots of facts.
    • 07/08/2004
    • 23:11:34
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Love

    This is a well thought out essay and I enjoyed your take on the poem.
    • 07/08/2004
    • 22:59:03
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Obesity in Teens

    This is such an important subject that is mostly ignored. I wish more people would take the time to think about the teens who will one day be in charge. I also think more teens should become more aware for themselves.
    • 07/08/2004
    • 22:56:28
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Intense

    Although the subject matter is painful, I admire the author for getting those feelings out. Whether this is just a work of fiction or an actual life story, I felt sad for the characters and hope that is was only a story.
    • 07/08/2004
    • 22:54:03
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Really great

    A friend's mom is going back to school and she totally fits the descriptions given. I liked the essay and learned a lot.
    • 07/08/2004
    • 22:45:00
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Cool

    Although I know very little about witchcraft and wicca, a friend of mine really believes in it. Now I have more information about her beliefs and understand her more. Thank you!
    • 07/08/2004
    • 22:43:06
    • Score: 13 out of 15 people found this comment useful.
  • Heart felt

    It was a good essay, but the grammer needs a little work.
    • 07/08/2004
    • 22:19:27
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Dreams

    I'm always interested in what my dreams mean and this piece makes me want to learn even more. It was a nice essay, but it needs a little more care in its set up (i.e. read it over once or twice)
    • 07/08/2004
    • 22:13:35
    • Score: 9 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
  • Sweet

    Although it wasn't an essay or paper, it was a cute poem. It does have a real feeling behind it, but I'm think it should also have some sort of explaination.
    • 07/08/2004
    • 22:09:06
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice work

    I know a little about mental illnesses, but this essay made a lot more sense and was very well thought out. The length was good and it was nicely presented.
    • 07/08/2004
    • 22:06:55
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • The ideas

    The story is rather brutal and some readers can be put off right away by the climactic ending. The essay is toned down and brings to light many of the real literary aspects, which can be overlooked upon first glance. Helpful essay.
    • 07/08/2004
    • 22:00:43
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Information

    The essay does not have much more than basic facts. Perhaps that is what will help others, but it just states what someone could look up on a company's website that deals with GPS.
    • 07/08/2004
    • 21:56:25
    • Score: 6 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
  • More ideas

    I read this book and wanted to know more about what others thought of it. The ideas in the essay were clear and well thought out. The book made a lot more sense after reading this. Thanks.
    • 07/08/2004
    • 21:52:25
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • I just read it...

    Having just seen the movie and previously reading the book, I found that the themes, which are mentioned in the essay, are much more apparent in the book. The movie, however, gives life to the characters that just reading the play cannot. The essay was insightful and thoughtprovoking.
    • 07/08/2004
    • 21:44:15
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.