Needs some editting but it's a really interesting topic!
- 13/03/2006
- 22:38:04
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Very well written, but have you overlooked the fact that empiricism (as applied in science) is a philosophical system?Just something to chew on :)
- 13/03/2006
- 22:34:21
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It's a good introduction to the Revolution from a freshman, not an analysis. However, I mistakenly didn't put it as "study notes" and instead as an essay.
- 13/03/2006
- 22:30:46
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There is no American Orthodox Church as of yet
- 08/02/2005
- 17:34:19
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The essay started off on a formal tone, yet zeroed in on the heart of the reader to convict him of the truth in the poem. Incredible job, once again.
- 15/07/2004
- 22:12:45
- Score: 32 out of 35 people found this comment useful.
This essay makes us know why you are the top-rated man on cheathouse. Your skills in mechanics and use of words is boggling. Your message always comes of extremely clear.
- 15/07/2004
- 22:08:23
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The author takes a poem of antiquity and drags it into the 21st century. Most (including myself) find the poem uninterpretable. However, he sheds insight onto its meaning and adds depth to the writing. Quite amazing.
- 15/07/2004
- 21:51:32
- Score: 52 out of 57 people found this comment useful.
Clear, concise, and to the point. It's the kind of essay I prefer to read.
- 15/07/2004
- 19:59:01
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goes in depth well and analyzes the comparison fully-i love this!!
- 04/06/2004
- 10:10:50
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sry but i didn't make a bibliography as it was not required-if you planned on using it you'll have to find the facts out on your own
- 30/05/2004
- 17:08:09
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good text in the beginnging (however, you never mention Napoleon's fallacies); very poor ending
- 30/05/2004
- 09:51:10
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poor grammar mechanics are present; does good job covering both sides of the issue yet should refrain from taking either side in the end; needs stronger language or a larger vocabulary
- 30/05/2004
- 09:01:24
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Grammar problems: Sententce structure turns out to make very little sense in many cases; too many simple sentencesTextual problems: VERY one-sided (however, perhaps these were the directions?); has claims that cannot be sited because they are false ("the new 'radical' alternative has taken over as the main religion", Atheism only makes up 2.4% according to the CIA World Factbook [2001 Survey]); has claims that could be sited yet simply are not sited; shows radical examples instead of moderate to realistic examples (school example); could use a larger vocabulary for a sophomore student
- 30/05/2004
- 08:58:47
- Score: 4 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
would be good if you were still in high school
- 29/05/2004
- 20:47:53
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however, please do not call this a novel; its more of a long research paper that reads like a story because it reveals a plot
- 29/05/2004
- 20:41:03
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a very good summary for elementary aged kids-i believe it will be well understood
- 29/05/2004
- 14:17:44
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this essay is very descriptive
- 29/05/2004
- 13:27:56
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good ideas yet this is surely not on par with good tenth grade writing
- 29/05/2004
- 12:51:57
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
covers any question I could ever have about his screw-excellent job
- 28/05/2004
- 21:41:26
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
this thing is filled with loads of emotion but its purpose (is it a personal letter?) confuses the heck outta me
- 28/05/2004
- 21:02:50
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This bookreport seems to be lacking any depth at all on the wonderful book that is "Animal Farm". Some grammar problems also exist. The report completely ignores the fact that the book is an allegory to the Russian Revolution. Seems more like a character analysis at some parts instead of a general summary.
- 28/05/2004
- 20:00:26
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
there are many grammar editings to be made and the structure should be re-oraganized to resemble a clearer thought process instead of a brainstorm...but your definitely hitting on something here!
- 28/05/2004
- 19:56:24
- Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.