Very full of content and I also like how you cited your information
- 05/12/2004
- 11:55:42
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this essay would have been a lot more better if you had not just focused on one part of romeo and juliet. It's just too short and lacks detailed analysis
- 28/10/2004
- 04:14:58
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I think this is a great essay, although it would've been much better if u had mentioned Thomas Jefferson's Statute of Religious Freedom.
- 28/10/2004
- 04:10:26
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This essay doesnt really look good when u just stick in quotes between the paragraphs.
- 28/10/2004
- 04:06:16
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
they seem to take their careers more seriously than we do. we tend do to do our jobs' because we want the money more than anything
- 28/10/2004
- 04:03:03
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
the convergence of different characteristics of people seems to apply to other cultures too.
- 28/10/2004
- 03:59:30
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i think one of my friends has level 1 narcissm. he's obessessed with getting a 6 pack and having bigger pectorals and biceps than me.
- 28/10/2004
- 03:51:48
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
i especially like how you cite your sources.
- 28/10/2004
- 03:46:50
- Score: 7 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
I wouldve liked to see more action in this essay and more length...
- 28/10/2004
- 03:42:10
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
This essay is really good. Especially for an 8th grader. I wouldnt even be able to write something like this when I was in 9th grade.
- 28/10/2004
- 03:37:13
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I can understand why you got an A on the paper. It has 4 nice paragraphs and the 3 last ones all explain what u gave to us in the intro.
- 03/09/2004
- 05:34:03
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this story is kinda lame for a high schooler but I guess it is kinda good.
- 03/09/2004
- 05:05:40
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
good story, but it's kinda short
- 24/08/2004
- 17:48:56
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.