Although there are some mistakes but this is very impressive with some very good points. I LIKED IT.
- 01/03/2006
- 12:50:57
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
The ending is very interesting. I enjoyed reading your childhood story.
- 09/02/2006
- 07:56:34
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
There are some spelling mistakes but the story is very interesting and passionate.
- 02/02/2006
- 08:24:12
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I enjoyed reading it.
- 31/01/2006
- 08:41:17
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Very Well Written. I like it.
- 16/01/2006
- 14:05:03
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I totally agree with this story. Very Good Job. Well Done.
- 05/12/2005
- 12:08:22
- Score: 5 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
Very emotional, interesting and creative. Good Work.
- 21/10/2005
- 00:47:27
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Very Enjoyable Story.
- 19/10/2005
- 07:28:35
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I enjoyed it. Good
- 17/10/2005
- 06:48:33
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
I think you need to add on something more to your eassy.But your theme is very different and interesting.
- 16/10/2005
- 11:04:52
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Your is eassy is very well written. It has lot of information and many thought provoking questions but what is missing, your own views and thoughts.
- 16/10/2005
- 04:16:48
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Very interesting and thought provoking. I really liked this one.Keep it up.
- 16/10/2005
- 03:54:33
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
You have picked up a good theme but your descriptions and reasonings are not sufficient.There is alot to write about these two animals. This eassy is very general and simple.
- 14/10/2005
- 13:06:40
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This is a good piece of writing but the figures of death toll is much more greater than you have given.
- 14/10/2005
- 03:15:02
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
I like it. Its very emotional and sentimental. The description you have given is good and intensity that you have build up of running out of time is excelllent.Hope to see you in Italian team.Good Job.
- 13/10/2005
- 13:22:59
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I really like this one. I appreciate your hardwork. I hope this will help to create some awareness among people.Nice Job.
- 12/10/2005
- 12:12:35
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Good eassy, very nice and parctical suggestions. I like the ending part too. Only that in the paragraph about government, you have used the word "government" too many times which gives a childish look.
- 11/10/2005
- 01:33:22
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Seems like u have done a good search on this person. What is missing in this is some kind of statistic about how many people are involved in this problems and how many are victims of this each year. You has mentioned three names but have given the details of only one and have totally skipped out other two. It would have been more good if there was something about them too.This eassy is interesting.
- 11/10/2005
- 01:19:38
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Story idea is good but the use of too much dialogue has cut off the description of what is going on because of which the reader does not get the clear idea what is going on. The ending is very good.
- 09/10/2005
- 13:07:38
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Your story is very interesting.Your idea for story is very different and new. Good descriptions. Use of simple english has made it more enjoyable. Good work.
- 09/10/2005
- 05:51:55
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.