An extremely nice story written. A really nice meaning behind.
- 01/04/2006
- 09:42:52
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The essay is ok, except it's better to add some quotes as there will be something to support your essay. Besides I think it's better to beware of too short paragraphs.
- 31/03/2006
- 03:37:41
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hmm I've always thought that I belong to hk =PAnyways nice definition of region ; and good reasons!
- 31/03/2006
- 03:32:18
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Wow nice and creative story! Quite descriptive and interesting =)
- 30/03/2006
- 21:38:37
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wahahaha. Nice structure of essay. Nice intro and conclusion.. a variety of sources used!
- 30/03/2006
- 21:35:44
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Quite detailed, and with examples given, which is really nice.And the message / thesis is really clear too.Anyways it's really say that many people divorce nowaways and affect their children..
- 29/03/2006
- 04:12:11
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I think it's not detailed enough as there are only 3 causes of it. And you didn't really elaborate and explain the age of enlightenment. You could give some examples of people's ideas.
- 29/03/2006
- 03:58:03
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Creative and nice descriptions! I could picture it in my mind. But I think you could talk about your feelings a bit more.
- 29/03/2006
- 03:56:04
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.