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  • Nice

    Nice stuff you've got.
    • 25/03/2006
    • 19:58:41
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Great

    I think this would be really invaluable for other people who need to write up an experiment.
    • 25/03/2006
    • 19:55:32
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good but useless

    This is a beautiful poem but it isn't going to be of use to anyone, including those looking to see how to write a poem.
    • 25/03/2006
    • 19:53:17
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Fabulous

    Great essay and its good to see extensive use of resources as detailed in your bibliography. However, you need to stop using I because this is supposed to be an essay.
    • 25/03/2006
    • 19:49:02
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Terrific

    But it would be good if you put more detail into the title as to exactly what part of the assassination you're writing about.
    • 25/03/2006
    • 03:46:35
    • Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • This is not an essay

    As I've said this is not an essay at all because you consistently refer to yourself and you are not arguing your points. However, if this is a speech like I think it is then I suppose it's ok but unspectacular.
    • 25/03/2006
    • 03:36:03
    • Score: 3 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Ok

    I think you need to define what you are talking about more as well as avoid colloqualism.
    • 25/03/2006
    • 03:30:31
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Great

    Terrific report. It would be good if you're more specific with the title.
    • 25/03/2006
    • 03:27:49
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Propaganda

    This appears to be an advertisement for Unilever and is absolutely useless, even for people researching the company.
    • 25/03/2006
    • 03:25:41
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Somewhat useless

    Although this is a good piece of writing, I don't see how it can be useful to anyone.
    • 25/03/2006
    • 03:21:12
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Average

    This is a poor essay that is extremely short, undetailed and unstructured. The and the conclusion is extremely thin in detail while the body has a series of unexpanded statements. However, this can be used for research.
    • 24/03/2006
    • 09:06:20
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Mediocre and useless

    The story is boring, the language is average and the structure is disorderly, giving a general sense disintegration.
    • 24/03/2006
    • 08:40:05
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Great

    This is an effective essay that contains a clear intro, sustained argument and an reiterating conclusion. The use language is commendable.
    • 24/03/2006
    • 08:36:13
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Article

    This article is very well written and very emotionally inspiring.
    • 24/03/2006
    • 08:09:17
    • Score: 0 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Good essay

    This is a good essay but your direct quotes are too long.
    • 24/03/2006
    • 08:06:31
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.