its the 1st time I have heard this. Why we are friends ( I don't know if its best friendship or not) and I am always surprised when I read your essay. I realize I just know a little bit about you and your life.
- 03/07/2009
- 21:20:20
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I really do not know that you can draw and tried piano. A bit surprised. Anyway, almost Asian parents are the same as yours." My parents are forcefully making me finish my business major, as they ensure me that it is the best option for me... They also asked me which major I would rather take if not business management, and before I had time to reply they said banking or finance sounded good to them " OMG, they are just like my parents :))
- 02/07/2009
- 12:32:49
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Thanks pjvscuba I myself don't like this aper though, it could be better. My citing sucks, I have to say I don't know how to cite sources at all, but I tried to do MLA style.
- 22/04/2009
- 01:45:14
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That's a really complicated situation but you did the right thing. The young woman should learn from that lesson as well.
- 29/03/2009
- 17:02:53
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Very poor grammar. But for a 6th grade ESOL level this is quite good.
- 15/03/2009
- 23:40:44
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According to your level I think your teacher should have given you A+. Good points, good structure.
- 09/03/2009
- 22:22:54
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what is your main point? analyzing the movie or criticizing the pop culture using examples from the movie? or what?
- 09/03/2009
- 22:05:26
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When I read the title I expected a boring piece of preacher about not to drink and drive and blah blah blah. But well, it turns out not anything like that at all! It's well thought, nicely written with amazing storyline. I love it.
- 03/03/2009
- 19:45:06
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I live in Vietnam, right next to china and I know what it's like to live in Asia with bad social accepted habits. I like your idea and the way you present it, it's the truth it's not racism or anything, it's just the bad side of a culture. However I do not really see the connection between your ideas, the structure is a bit confusing. If you rearrange it people would understand it better.
- 03/03/2009
- 18:57:56
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i had this history test tomorrow and your paper really helps me out, thanks a lot
- 25/09/2008
- 06:29:49
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I find some words in your writing so strange and I can not look up them in my dictionary ( maybe my dictionary is not good enough).But some words like that:Neglectence -- do you mean "neglectfulness"??or dominet -- do you mean "dominate"???And at last, I think your points are so strong and good, but you wrote too long in each paragraph, and in someway, I find many the same idea or the same sentences in the different paragraphs.
- 22/08/2008
- 01:40:05
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I found no connection in the title and your writing :-<
- 22/08/2008
- 01:00:06
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You are open-minded and I like reading your writing so much.
- 19/08/2008
- 18:17:38
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I don not know why but I don't feel like this essay. Your party is so tense. It is just a party, so let it be a real party.
- 19/08/2008
- 07:40:08
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What you said means that living in America is the most wonderful thing? Oh yeah, I see. You are so happy wheares " have people fighting in wars and dieing to get what we want". Do you know the war in Irak, in VN??? You can not think any other better than money, freedom , the rights or "wear whatever you want". I agree that "it is a matter of opinion", but the ideas you use in your writing are so ugly, so bad and so silly.
- 19/08/2008
- 07:30:29
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So good an essay. The way you talk about an old basic topic is very interesting. I like it :D
- 18/08/2008
- 20:32:26
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Anyway, whatever they say, men still pay more attention to beautiful skinny women than to fat women. But your ideas in your writing are strong and I think you made a exploit survey. So this is a quite good essay :D
- 18/08/2008
- 20:23:31
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It is not like an essay and I think U should try better the next time :(, A weak essay :|
- 18/08/2008
- 08:19:09
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Some people criticized your writing in some comments above. But I love it. It is the reality. A person can become a better one with the help of money. Why all we say that " Money is nothing" whereas we all want it, lack it and work so hard to make it. It is not evil to earn money and make the life more beautiful :D So I like your idea when you say "plz don't be the salver of the money". The most interesting essay I have ever found in this web.
- 17/08/2008
- 09:36:15
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I like Johnny Deep but I haven't known much about him. So thank you for giving me some interesting informations. Sometime, One loves an actor because of not only his films but also his attitude about life.
- 16/08/2008
- 01:42:58
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She has been being beside you, the past, the present and the future. I am sure she is in heaven, cause who has "the safe hands are holding me tightly to his chest" is an angel. Love your writing so much!
- 16/08/2008
- 01:31:28
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"Change can become a good thing only if you make it a good thing".I like this sentence in your essay. I am trying to see and get your point. Maybe it's hard. However, thank you for your strong idea:D
- 15/08/2008
- 22:38:10
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I guess You come from Vietnam. I am a Vietnamese, too. And I think in our country, young people usually live with the parents untill they are 25, when they have their own jobs and make money to live by themselves. I know living with parents makes so much inconvenient. But it is traditional in Vietnam. I am living with my mom and dad now. Sometimes they make me crazy. However, I like to be in a house with them and I love all the memories we had.
- 15/08/2008
- 22:32:02
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amazing experiment :DMaybe one day I will try to live a day without one of my senses. So I can understand the difficulty of the unlucky people who were born without them. And feel happy when I am a normal person.
- 15/08/2008
- 06:25:16
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I like the way you see three categories of lies as the brothers and the truth is the cousin of them. It's so intelligent :D
- 15/08/2008
- 02:39:16
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I have some friends.when I have a big trouble( like now), I can't find them anywhere. We made friends without being interested in money or something else like you say in your essay. And I don't understand the reason why. The ideas in your essay are academic ones. Maybe they are true. But in reality, friendship(like love) has no words to be explained. Reading your essay, I feel boring. They say the thing everyone knows!
- 15/08/2008
- 01:37:20
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Your idea, your point, your writing...it's all marvellous, so thank you.... for all :D
- 14/08/2008
- 09:20:44
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Thanks 4 some useful advices :D
- 07/08/2008
- 07:29:55
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God made the men and the women to be different. And let they be. But I think maybe you forgot the title of this essay. You talked so much about the break up and the disappointment in men :( If possible, men should learn the women 's sacrifices and the way to express the feelings !
- 05/08/2008
- 17:49:51
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A really good essay, which made me believe in my dream :D
- 05/08/2008
- 17:31:13
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good choice!good job!good plan!...and good information you gave to me :Dso thanks !
- 05/08/2008
- 06:54:11
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The content is very good, but I think they should be use more "dot" among the sentences.
- 04/08/2008
- 19:57:21
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You made the right choice! Your son 'll be safe, he is growing up. You love him, but let the life teach him. He 'll be a man in the future :D
- 04/08/2008
- 16:50:11
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it's Christmas today and I am reading your story. moving,though simple, yet tells a lot
- 25/12/2007
- 06:48:37
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amazing, really amazing. I was just browsing the works on this site, an I have to say this does amaze me. the beginning was smooth and then suddenly lead to a unexpected end. Light and deep, pure and painful.Love it.
- 14/12/2007
- 06:13:37
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Great essay! Clearly sited with specific details!
- 06/04/2007
- 05:42:39
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Such as:For example, a person need find some news about the world today, the only thing he has to do is sitting in front of the screen and updating anything he wants.====>For example, a person needS TO find some news about the world today, the only thing he has to do is TO sit in front of the screen and updating anything he wants
- 25/01/2007
- 04:31:46
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Good supports.Anyway to vince911: does length mean the essay is good or not???
- 29/11/2006
- 04:25:49
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