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  • Good Job

    Hey I'm in 9th grade also and our class just finished reading the "Odyssey". I thought you did a good job on this essay and relates very well to the novel. Although, I do have one suggestion: Even though I know your topic is about Odysseus being a leader, you seem to repeat yourself many times when you say "exemplary leader" or "leadership skills". Maybe you could try wording these phrases differently? Like saying something like "Role Model"...etc. Overall, it's great!
    • 22/11/2006
    • 11:33:34
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • I like your essay :-)

    I think your essay is very well written and very factual. Although I do agree with "jackosmacko" that your essay would be even better if you gave your input on your own views of cloning. But if you were going for just a factual essay, then it was great. So how do you really feel about cloning anyway?
    • 20/11/2006
    • 22:45:22
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  • Great Essay

    Being a Christian, it's very hard for me to accept the idea of same-sex marriage, but you've made some outstanding points and this is a very good essay. :-) Personally, I'll never be comfortable with same-sex marriage, but this essay has helped me to realize that gays/lesbians should have the same rights as everyone else.
    • 20/11/2006
    • 16:43:36
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.