There are many other dangerous driving habits, which are not mentioned in this essay, for example, compulsive need to overtake other cars, smoking while driving, not observing the traffic regulations, and so on and so on. Maybe you also need to give more data and cite some sources, because the text lacks in depth.
- 26/03/2004
- 05:07:03
- Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Very informative and well-organized, although there are some lapses in spelling and grammar.
- 14/12/2003
- 08:26:59
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
A very interesting and informative essay. It would have been even better if in the last paragraph you provided more details about the methods used in the past.
- 14/12/2003
- 08:17:33
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I didn't quite get your point...and the language is a bit awkward.
- 11/12/2003
- 05:21:35
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Was she black? What kind of people were her parents (their names are not vitally important, since they aren\'t known to the public)? Why was she arrested (more details about the conference)? To be honest, this is kind of dry, you need to elaborate it more. You\'ve got the basics, just fill in with some details and explanations.
- 10/12/2003
- 07:07:38
- Score: 5 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
Why is wanting economic security a better reason to marry than sexual gratification? Your essay is great up to the point where you start talking about \"positive\" reasons for marriage. I think your personal experience example doesn\'t add to the quality of the essay; at least you could have mentioned that in some cases there is no disctinct and apparent reason but a deep feeling that this is the right action...
- 10/12/2003
- 06:36:28
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Quotations perhaps are a too big percentage of the whole body of the text and not much is said about the poetic techniques in fact.
- 09/12/2003
- 11:02:16
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
A very interesting and pleasant to read essay, but perhaps it is not for the Education category
- 09/12/2003
- 10:38:03
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I think the reasons given aren't very strong ones. In the second paragraph you give specific examples of only how the USA could benefit from such merging. Also, I think free trade can occur without problems without joining in one country. The statement about the reduction of taxes made me laugh; if the two countries join, the amount of taxes that need to be collected would be approximately equal to the sum of the amounts each country collects, not just to the taxes collected by the USA - therefore I don't see any reduction. In addition, I believe that some research needs to be made about the number of people who prefer warm weather and the number of people who prefer the cold. Only then you can make a valid statement that in the case of joining the population would spread evenly throughout the new country. The Euro: I am not sure whether its value rose or the value of the dollar fell because of the politics of USA. Perhaps you should compare it to some other currencies as well. Besides, the European countries did not joined as one country, so the example is somewhat irrelevant. And for dessert, a joining that did not work well - think about the Soviet Union.
- 09/12/2003
- 10:06:29
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
The essay is interesting and informative, but the content does not match well with the topic. First the issue is only one, therefore there is an extra "s" in the title and secong, nowhere in the text evidence can be found that the issue discussed is indeed controversial. Otherwise it is a great text, just change the topic.
- 07/12/2003
- 13:47:04
- Score: 9 out of 10 people found this comment useful.