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  • Comment on the avro arrow

    it was a pretty good essay. there were a few parts that didnt seem to flow though and the overall point seemed a little confused. i think you could have explained what exactly an avro arrow was from the start. it took me a minute of reading to realize that it was a plane. now that may mean that im just completely ignorant about planes but keep in mind that i'm not the only one.
    • 05/01/2004
    • 16:15:31
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.