The first sentence of the conclusion confuses me. It says, "...NOT being able to download free music should be prohibited." Does this mean that it should be allowed? I think the sentence was meant to read, "... being able to download free music should be prohibited." If this is what was meant, the essay does a good job of showing how downloaders hurt the music industy, namely the producers. The information presented is good for persuading against downloading music, however I thought that the wording and tone could have been more persuasive.
- 21/04/2004
- 16:39:56
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