Finally a essay that has a table of content. A nice layed out clear essay i hope more people when submitting an essay use a table of contents has it lets the reader know if that the sort of essay they are looking for.
- 09/06/2004
- 13:08:47
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
You got a 95% grade for this piece of awful essay you must be joking, looks like a 10% grade essay to me. Either the teacher who marked it was too generous or your a liar.
- 09/06/2004
- 13:00:48
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This is not a bad essay but a bibliograpthy would be nice
- 06/06/2004
- 07:55:43
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
This essay is short and lack that lust so i am gonna have to give it a miss
- 02/06/2004
- 14:16:09
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This is essay is okay but some of the facts are not true. For example for all those people that say biggie was killed as retaliation for the death of 2pac is a lie and for those that say 2pac was killed by biggie is untrue. There is one person who was involved in both deaths. Are you ready to here this am i clear to ya, the person who killed both these best rappers ever was the leader of deathrow who was in capital letters SUGE KNIGHT the idiot that was with 2pac when he got shot. He panned the murder of 2pac as suge knight was the producer of 2pac and 2pac was going to leave the deathrow record label so as revenge he planned the murder of 2pac. But hear the punchline people wonder why the killers of 2pac and biggie never got caught this because the police was in on it and also the F.B.I. The F.B.I. wanted 2pac and biggie dead as they saw the popularity they had on black people and how these 2 rappers had power whereby they could make the country of the usa have a revolution and those are the facts. I could talk a lot more but i have spoke a lot.
- 02/06/2004
- 14:09:58
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
This essay is wicked and its a absolute shame you got banned for swearing on the chat section. The user Billyjreed is a complete and utter fool for reporting you to cheathouse. Lots of people swear on the chat section but why did the user Billyjreed yeah that idiot report you everybody swears so why did Billyjreed be an idiot and report you. If anybody sees billyjreeds essays or meets him in the chat section just if you could remind him what he did by banning the user NotoriousUmarSmall.Thanks
- 01/06/2004
- 07:51:05
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
This is not good enouth although it does have some good points but a very small conclusion
- 01/06/2004
- 07:35:56
- Score: 7 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
This essay is treadful and from this essay i can see no effort was put in. You should be ashammed of yourself all you were trying to do when submitting this essay was to gain 375 or whatever points you get for submitting an essay. But i will give you ab unhappy face as you deserve one.
- 01/06/2004
- 07:29:37
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
i can understand why you only got 66% as i have studied marketing myself.Whilst writing a marketing essay you must clearly state your marketing strategy and what made you come up with that strategy based on primary and secondary research. In order to get the high grades you must include a boston matrix and a presentation.
- 01/06/2004
- 07:23:14
- Score: 8 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
this essay is nicely written and i can se a lot of work was put into it
- 30/05/2004
- 19:24:35
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
This is a good essay a planned out well but i think you sholud maybe write more about genetic technology
- 29/05/2004
- 09:17:49
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Totally agree with u pakistan zindabad should go to pakistan rather than india murdabad. Nice work
- 23/05/2004
- 12:53:18
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.