This essay is too personal. It's intresting but poorly structured the introduction needs to be more concise and the conclusion needs to offer a sharper summary. In spite of this , I think it is a good try.
- 12/07/2004
- 06:55:31
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This essay is hopless. Sorry, I must sound harsh but it's the truth. This piece is poorly written ( it jumps from 1st person to 2nd person and even explores 3rd person) its structure obviously needs work. In terms of its content it is far too unreliable i ponder: was the author of this piece inspired by one his dreams.
- 11/07/2004
- 07:14:03
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Gramatically this piece is premeture.It lacks originality but is undoubtably informative. With an increased emphasis on the anaysis and less focus on retelling the movie I'm sure this piece will stand the test of time.
- 11/07/2004
- 06:57:54
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
This essay is more of an article in terms of its anatomy. Inspite of thie your records are quite harmonius and I'm sure this piece will continue to enjoy unprecedented popularoty as its critics proggesively fade into oblivion.
- 11/07/2004
- 06:50:54
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.